2.09.2016
1. The editorial letter was devoted to the comparison of capitalism and socialism as two contrasting political systems. The essay consists of the introduction, three body paragraphs and the conclusion. However, the second paragraph, about socialism and capitalism, seems to me now a bit superfluous, since the information provided does not contribute to the logical arrangement of the essay at all and can be easily omitted. It would be better to describe some similarities of these two political systems. Besides, the conclusion should be elaborated and improved.
2. The Journalistic profile is devoted to the famous CEO and auto manufacturer Elon Musk. The major part of the work contains the biography of the scientist and the explanations of his contribution to space exploration. There are the opinions of other people, e.g. Malcolm Gladwell, who shares his viewpoint about Musk’s achievements and skills. The work concludes with the description of Musk’s activities and spheres of work. Thus, we have researched the life and career of a famous person and comprised the information into a logical and relatively short text.
3. In the ethical essay we have analyzed the sphere of business from the viewpoint of ethical issues. We have provided a few situations connected with ethical problems and explained them, as in the aspect of business between companies, as in the relationship between the employer and the staff. Much more can be said about this topic, and each subject is worth discussing. We have prepared something like an introduction to a book about business ethics, where major issues and details are mentioned. While preparing this work I have read many interesting articles and came over many interesting ideas o myself.
