Comments For 2 Students Essay Example

I like the way Gabriela describes every article and names the reasons of her preferences. Though I like the profile of the ballerina less than Gabriela, I understand the student’s preferences. Meanwhile, she thinks that both articles are good and the profile of the poker player is worthy reading too. She points out that the way how the profile was divided and separated makes it easier and more readable for the audience. Therefore, she enjoys reading it and has no misunderstandings or even ‘frustration’ in the profile. I couldn’t agree more that the profile about the ballerina has more ‘fluency’ in it. There are no divisions but it makes this story more realistic and Gabriela likes this element. I have a different preference although I must agree with Gabriela since her description is detailed and proves her thoughts and impressions.
Don’t like Jessica’s feedback bout the journalistic profiles. She gives only an overall opinion and doesn’t share details of her conclusion. She writes only a few sentences just indicating what profile she enjoys more. There isn’t enough evidence in Jessica’s feedback and it can’t be understandable why she has come up with this decision. It’s a hard and even complicated task to decide if I agree with her opinion or not since I can’t truly understand her position concerning the profiles. As far as I have understood Jessica likes the ballerina’s profile more since the poker player’s profile is too professional for her. It’s just one explanation for her preference. However, she doesn’t go on writing about the reasons why the poker player’s profile is too professional for her. The only thing I understand and totally agree with her is that a journalistic profile is more captivating to write.