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When living in southern China, I experienced the thrill of business ownership. In , I established an online second-hand business selling a select line of clothing. I had the support of parents with my father being a successful businessman and mother working as a banker. However, this first business venture only lasted three months closing with a net profit of $3,000.
When moving to the United States in 2013, my academic goal was to
Through the online business adventures, I demonstrated initiative, reliability, teamwork, good communication skills, and always viewed challenges as opportunities. I perceive myself as a life-long learner and accept responsibility for decisions made.
Having completed academic goals for the first two years at University and worked as an entrepreneur, I am now ready to achieve my dream of obtaining a Bachelor of Science degree and becoming an exceptional business owner.
I have successfully achieved the academic goal envisioned, grown from the entrepreneur experience, and now ready for another adventure at your university. I am determined, dedicated, and driven to realize my goal; and provided the opportunity, I will rise to meet all academic challenges at your university and become a graduate that the University of Minnesota can be proud of.
Works Cited
Academic Ranking of World Universities. http://www.shanghairanking.com/Institution.jsp?param=University%20of%20Minnesota,%20Twin%20Cities
Digital Campus. “Bachelor of Science in Marketing.” 2013 http://digitalcampus.umn.edu/programs/marketing.html
http://www.careers-in-marketing.com/