Exemplar Essay On Comment For 3 Students And 2 Students To Write After

I like how you have introduced the topic. I agree with you when you say that identifying the right human resources is a big challenge that almost all new ventures face. You have mentioned poor financial understanding as an example of financial decisions that can make a new venture fail. You have supported your work with citations from the textbook meaning that you understand what you are talking about.
Lack of objective evaluation tops your list of the challenges that new venture face. I agree with this because without proper evaluation of objectives, a venture cannot understand their performance in the market, hence the failure. You have also noted that asking good questions can help a new venture to prevent failure of new products. You should have, however, given an example from the real market where entrepreneurs have failed because they did not ask good questions and failed.
Ignorance on legal issues according to you is a big challenge to new ventures. I see this as a good point and hence needed you to give it more weight and provide more information on how it can be a challenge. However, I agree with you when you say that lack of adequate funding can be a financial mistake that can lead to the failure of a new venture.
I like you stance on Chelsea Handler who came out in public and admitted she had two abortions. Chelsea admits that she had an unprotected sex with someone she did not even like. Why should someone have an unprotected sex then put their lives in danger through abortion? I am together with you in this to discourage people such as Chelsea from doing such things.
I respect your faith in God. However, I apologize to say that the belief that everything is God’s plans should not be part of reproductive rights discussion. You do not support abortion but give an exception to women who might have been raped. This does not make any sense since, in all instances, there is the loss of an infant’s life.