Exemplar Essay On Comments For 2 Students To Write After

Hi Jessika, I agree with your opinion and evaluation of 2 portfolios. You explained in an understandable and precise way why you think David Catillo’s portfolio is the best, and why Ann Domenique Marcella’s is the worst. I couldn’t agree more with you about the structure and materials used in the portfolio. You have mentioned that these materials help to know David from the genuine side – I like your point and totally agree with it. However, I can’t agree totally about the font, used by David, especially its size. I do suppose, it is too small for being recognized as a readable one. Talking about Ann Domenique Marcella, I respect your point about her portfolio as being rather more autobiographical than the academic one. You have pointed out that she didn’t write about her skills (perhaps she didn’t have any of them) but she described her personal life in a too detailed way. I also want to agree with the point of her poor grammar and using the same information which distracts and get the reader bored.
Hi Amanda, I agree with you that Ann Domenique Marcella’s is the worst. You have noticed that she used the same information twice and I also agree that a cover letter should have been shorter and less personalized. I also agree that there is no necessary academic information and even hints at her skills. You pointed at her mistakes in the CV and I agree with it too. I think the evaluation of David’s portfolio is a little too short. But I see your main thought and agree with it. I would like you have described all your point more detailed as you did with Ann’s portfolio. But in general, your comments are true and precise, and I couldn’t agree with them more.