Expertly Written Essay On Comments For 2 Students To Follow

The letter is written in a proper structure following all the necessary instructions. In the letter, the student doesn’t use personal pronouns ‘I’ or ‘We’. In general, there are 7 paragraphs as it was written in the assignment. The first paragraph is the introduction which is short (only 2 sentences) but the student managed to grab readers’ attention and show general idea. The second paragraph is aimed to show the author’s reaction on this issue – the student included it in the one sentence. There are 2 paragraphs which clearly demonstrate supportive evidence in the letter. After that (as it was indicated in the instruction) there is a paragraph of the other-side opinion, a paragraph of possible solutions, and conclusion. Finally, the whole letter is clear and understandable for the audience since the student followed all the necessary instruction concerning the structure. All the thoughts, ideas, and solutions to this issue are divided into paragraphs so that the reader doesn’t get confused.
The other letter is written well in general but the whole structure is a little bit distracted. The student tries not to use ‘I’ and ‘We’ in the letter. Despite, there are still cases of usage of these pronouns, especially in the conclusion. To my mind, the instruction is strong enough since the sentences are very eye-catching and get the readers into the problem described by the student. The evidence is named in the second paragraph where should be an author’s reaction and, also, in the paragraph or possible solutions or suggestions. It seems that the original paragraphs with supportive arguments are weak and demanding more details. Finally, the general idea may be understandable for the audience; however, some facts are vague and blurred because of the problems in the structure.