Writing business letters
P.O. BOX 523-0012,
New York.
Henley Street -423
Haley Johnson,
President
Business Writing With An Edge Company
P.O. BOX 523-0012,
New York.
Joachim’s Street -324
Dear Haley,
I’m interested in the business plan because of the following;
- I’m highly prospecting of creating my own online company in which I will include several blogs.
- I would wish to gain information regarding the statistics pertaining to your company as I consider this information to be of utter importance in helping me plan for impending business. Most importantly, I would wish to know the number of hits in your blog and the profile of the audience that access the site on a regular basis.
With this information I will adequately be prepared for a presentation in the forthcoming investor’s summit to be held on 10th December this year. Additionally, I consider the aforementioned information to be of great value to my business and I will not hesitate sharing it with my potential business partners to ensure the effectiveness, efficiency and success of my impending business.
You have always been of great service to me and I do trust that my request shall be approved. However, I’m ready to unquestionably take any decision from you. I look forward for a greater cooperation.
Thank you
Sign .
Laketa Young
Haley Johnson,
President
Business Writing With An Edge Company
P.O. BOX 523-0012,
New York.
Joachim’s Street -324
December 8, 2013
P.O. BOX 523-0012,
New York.
Henley Street -423
Dear Laketa,
I received your request to meet my company management team so that you could peruse our business plan. I would like to thank you for acknowledging the important role that .. has taken in transforming the business world and the society in general. You have a great idea too. However, though we value your friendship, we are unable to approve the request considering the position at which our company currently stands.
We would otherwise have wished to approve the request but we were constrained by the following:
- The company operates under a strict privacy policy. Allowing you to inspect our business plan will therefore by a violation of our own rules and principles and I’m sure you too would not wish to compromise what you stand for.
- Currently the information you requested for might not be readily available as we have just updated our platform and during the process we unwillingly lost very crucial data that could have been of value to you.
- Our competitors may gain access to the information and use it to affront the good name of the company considering the stiff competition that is now prevailing in the market.
- Presenting the plan to you during the meeting will put us at loggerheads with our clients and we do consider them to be of great importance to us. We are self-conscious and do not want to lose them.
All in all, you have a great idea and I believe you can still succeed in creating your own business even without perusing our plan. Your ideas are great and if you devote you r time, resources and efforts to it you are surely going to succeed. However, we might approve your application in future if need be. I hope that you will continue cooperating with us despite the small hitch. Feel free to contact us in case you need further clarifications.
Thank you.
Sign..
Haley Johnson
President, Business Writing With An Edge Company.
Haley Johnson,
President
Business Writing With An Edge Company
P.O. BOX 523-0012,
New York.
Joachim’s Street -324
December 8, 2013
P.O. BOX 523-0012,
New York.
Henley Street -423
Dear Laketa,
Thank you so much for showing interest in the business plan of our company. It shows how much the society values our company. Considering your great ideas and good intentions, we fully and willing approve your request. We shall avail all the information that you requested for as we consider you to be a potential partner.
We found no reasons for turning down the request as this would have disadvantaged you as well as our company. After making a critical analysis of your request we were able to identify the following factors that led to the approval of the application.
- Arranging a meeting with you and presenting our business plan for you to obtain some information from it will enable you to have a broader vision of your dream as well as helping us identify any factors that might need to be altered in the proposal.
- Our intention is to create a highly competitive business world where strategies matter. We found your ideas to be in line with this.
- We did not want to ruin the good cooperation that we have always had.
We would therefore wish that you avail yourself for the meeting to be held in our conference hall situated at our headquarters on 15th December at 10.30am. Feel free to come with almost five of your friend. We value your continued cooperation and we are eagerly waiting for the meeting. If for any reasons you not be able to attend the meeting on the said date, please inform us and we shall be willing to effect any changes.
Thank you
Sign..
Haley Johnson
President, Business Writing With An Edge Company.
