Plan: Differences
Audience: Students struggling in their lives
Purpose: To inform and entertain their mind on the power of humility
Categories of Comparison: Personal life, way of talking and teachings
Brainstorm:
Comparison paragraph rough draft
At that time, the religious leaders and the teachers of the very arrogant, proud and, they were attention seekers. They demanded re from the people of the world especially by uplifting themselves and their social status above the rest of the people. Their teachings were riddled with pride and arrogance only similar to that of leaders who the world, who were interested in showing of. The religious leaders and the teachers of the law did not share even pathways with the people of the world or the members of their congregations. On the other hand, Jesus exhibited traits of humility of the highest orders his teachings were full of humble examples including his personal life. He reached out to the poor and shower them with affection and compassion at all instances. Presently, in his teachings, he seeks to share the good news with those who are abandoned or ignored by the world. He is humble in deeds and words.
Revised Comparison paragraph
- Personal life of Jesus as a lowly
- Unlike the teachers and the prominent religious leaders, Jesus lived and slept in the fields with no specific house
- Jesus’s way of talking as a humble orator
- Then, leaders and teachers of religion spoke with pride, authority and judgemental attitude
- Now, Jesus speaks in a polite, humble, conciliatory and non-judgemental manner
- Teaching of Jesus portrays humility of the highest order
- Then, teachers of the law were hypocrites who wished for fame and attention from the brethren
- Now, Jesus through his teachings, encourages people laden with troubles and difficulties to seek him in a private way or place
- Then, the religious leaders and teachers of the laws commanded respect from brethren in a way that they never shared even pathways or in other thing for that matter
- Now, Jesus meets all sorts of people from all walks of life on a daily basis, through teachings He encourage people to come to Him (Zuck 6)
Edited paragraph
1Personal life of Jesus as a lowly
- Unlike the teachers and the prominent religious leaders, Jesus lived and slept in the fields with no specific house
- Jesus’s way of talking as a humble orator
- Then, leaders and teachers of religion spoke with pride, authority and judgemental attitude
- Now, Jesus speaks in a polite, humble, conciliatory and non-judgemental manner
- Teaching of Jesus portrays humility of the highest order
- Then, teachers of the law were hypocrites who wished for fame and attention from the brethren
- Now, Jesus through his teachings, encourages people laden with troubles and difficulties to seek him in a private way or place
- Then, the religious leaders and teachers of the laws commanded respect from brethren in a way that they never shared even pathways or in other thing for that matter
K. Now, Jesus meets all sorts of people from all walks of life on a daily basis, through teachings He encourage people to come to Him
Work Cited
Zuck, Roy B. Teaching as Jesus taught. Baker Books, 1995.
