Good Example Of Essay On Appeal Letter

The purpose of this letter is to seek your consideration regarding the grade I received for this class. When I found out the results, I was disappointed because I knew I exerted effort but due to an unforeseen incident my grades were tremendously affected. First, I would like to express my gratitude for allowing me to see the breakdown of the grade. I tried personally communicating to you, but I was not able to due to my class schedule. I learned from a friend that your office hour is up to 11 on Wednesday.
After the final exam, I was keen on talking to you but I know that the time was limited. I am glad that you are willing to hear out my reason for why I desire to get a higher grade than B despite the outcome of midterm grade. I took a proctor test on Friday afternoon due to the conflicting schedule with my other class. Unfortunately, my gums started aching due to fatigue. I originally planned to consult a dentist after the midterm. My situation did not improve and come the test day my gums became extremely painful. I could not focus on my exam at all; I knew I could not postpone the exam because I was the one who emailed the testing time. The pain continued to increase as I was doing the essay. I had to constantly prop up my chin with my left hand in a futile attempt to reduce the pain. I barely finished my exam and was reduced to tears while waiting for my bus home.
I knew how important my midterm exam is to my grade. With this in mind, despite the pain and destruction I continued answering the exam. To be honest, I did not do well with the 15% of but tried my best with the remaining. I doubled my efforts for this class; I went to the tutoring center at least once a week and spent 4-5 hours studying on my own so I can improve my skills. My desire to finish this class increased every day. The motivation is not only because this is important for my admission decision to transfer but of course to see the fruits of my hard work.
I am hoping that you will consider the improvements in my essays and the circumstance that I encountered. The result does not reflect the amount of effort and time I invested into completing the exam despite the pain I was feeling.