Good Example Of Why I Changed The Work Essay

Since the paper format was in MLA, and I had used APA referencing style, I had to change the first sentence on page one of the article. MLA uses the author and the page number (if available in the incitation). Besides, I had used the word ‘adult” in its plural form while it should have been in the singular. I had also used a redundant word “people” in the second sentence. In line four, I had used the wrong capitalization, type 2 diabetes is a common noun, and therefore, there was no need for capitalization. Moreover, I had not used the plural form of the words ‘institution’ and ‘organizations’. On sentence nine, I had used the wrong plural, instead of ‘this,’ I had used these while referring to a single factor and also used a redundant word ‘the.’ On the same page, I had also wrongly used the quotation marks giving a wrong beginning on the quote entirely and, as result confusing the reader.
On page 3, I had used wrong quotation marks implying speech other than using single quotes to indicate that the word’s meaning is not in the literal sense but needs another interpretation contextually. There was also a wrong spelling of the word ‘research’ and additional spacing, and without a comma to make the workflow on the third page. On page four, a comma was missing on the first line that made the flow of the work not smooth. Besides, there was also the wrong spelling of the word ‘MacDonald’ by not capitalizing it correctly. In the last page, the work cited page was on the same page as the last paragraph something that is not allowed in academic writing. The reference page begins on the next page. I learned that it was important to follow all the rule of academic writing.