Dear Admissions Committee,
I am writing to you to say thank you for your review of my application as well as you consider my candidacy to become a member of this law school.
After many months of researching, Hofstra law society was on the top of student organizations that I see myself being involved a lot because of similar believes. This school is my top choice and if I am admitted from the waitlist I will be committed to attending. Moreover, it is worth mentioning that several years ago there was a graduation of my brother that was held at the Hofstra main auditorium. On my way to the very ceremony I was fell in love with its campus (that is situated just perfect, close to New York City), architecture and landscape beauty and, of course, people. I know I will be able to flourish while giving back all at the best of my ability. I am sure I can become a good member of the school and bring success to it.
I know that community of high school is represented by different perspectives and backgrounds, I am sure I can become a perfect part of this community and to learn, to enrich my intellectual and social life. I am impressed by the number of student organizations and have already imagined how I participate in one or more of them.
I feel that this place is exactly the place where I can get great experience, profound knowledge, real friends and get acquainted with the masters of law. Thank you for taking time to read my letter.
