My opinion
The amount of information that you have provided regarding Give Kids the World Village (GKTW) is highly commendable and satisfactory. It provides a detailed analysis of Give Kids the World Village. The analysis of stakeholders is thorough and provides a limelight of what just happens in the organization. However, under the concerns of the internal stakeholders, the subsection of the board of directors, there is this statement “maintaining funders”. You should possibly consider changing the line to read, “Maintaining financiers” as that will sound friendlier and improve the coherence of the entire analysis.
The technical environment of GKTW village is clearly explained. The disclosure of the various social Medias that GKTW is found on is of great importance as it just enlightens any interested individual that GKTW village has links with virtually the entire world. Nevertheless, something very important is missing out: how to access the organization’s accounts on the social media. Prior to finalizing the description of the technical environment, this ought to have been brought out as it would have helped the wider society to obtain more information about the village via the internet.
The provided financial position of the organization is enough for an individual to access its performance. It is enough to enable stakeholders and members of the public to gauge the organization. Apparently, the organization can be classified among the best performing organizations based on the provided information and stakeholders should feel free to invest in it since it is creating a positive impact in the society. However, it would have looked better, detailed and simple to analyze if the financial information was provided in form of a financial statement. All in all, the entire description in the article is overwhelming.
