Communication: Article Review
I have keenly read my classmate work and I wish to grade the work effectively and provide a comprehensive feedback based on my understanding. Additionally, I will mention a few gaps that I have identified in the work and comment on the same. The work would be graded based on the following parameters. Firstly, analysis of self- leadership assessment. Secondly, critical analysis of the result characterized with concise and well-structured sentences and ability to expound the points using examples and life experiences. Thirdly, the paper will be graded based on grammar and spelling constructs.
Leadership self-assessment assignment (awarded 22 points): My classmate showed a high level of professionalism when analyzing assessment results and took the task seriously. Honesty and ability to interpret result accurately was evident in the work. Emotional results affirmed that my classmate lacks self-control and is impulsive in nature. In order to reaffirm this, my classmate has integrated life experiences, which shade more light on this subject. In my analysis, I also established that individual who lacks self control tend to be impulsive and unrealistic in certain situations. It is clear that lack of self-control influence one’s self esteem especially when in a social gathering. Based on this analysis, it is clear the learner was able to interpret, analyze, and present assessment results in a logical manner. However, the learner could have explained further how these constructs influence their personalities and emotionally intelligence.
I will award my classmate 15 points for concise, analytical, and elaborative analysis of the assessment results. When reading the work, one is able to understand what the learner is addressing because there is flow of ideas, coupled with logical argument. My classmate mentions that the exercise was interesting because it unraveled strengths, weaknesses, and the learner’s self-efficacy levels. I echo the same sentiments because I was able to discover my personality traits, strengths and weakness; an idea that I am working on now.
In terms of grammar and spelling, I will award 3 points. Some of the sentence contained a few grammar mistakes. For instance, “the test result said that,” this is grammatically wrong. Instead, the learner should have stated that, “Result findings indicated.” The work need to be revised carefully so that to correct grammar and spelling mistakes. Additionally, my classmate should learn how to use punctuation marks correctly.
