5/ 18/ 2016
Janet Smith,
2345 Green Avenue,
Olympia, WA 37947.
Dear Mrs. Smith,
Are you looking for flexible ways of safely exercising at home? Many people find it convenient to workout at home where they can have a flexible workout. Having the right equipment comes in handy in providing the same or more than the experience that a gym would provide.
The Sole Fitness E95 Elliptical Machine is a smooth, user-friendly and durable treadmill that is specially made to suit home use. It has an incredible 40 degrees incline and has a free flywheel. The E95 has the longest warranty of 5 years, guaranteeing you excellent service and available support.
The treadmill is rated second best by TreadmillDoctor.com and has fantastic reviews from users who praise it for delivering what it promises. You are welcome to anyone of our local stores for a free 1hr trial. Kindly give us a call and our agents will be glad to answer your questions and boo you for a trial.
Sincerely,
{Signature}
Marketing Manager.
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First Paragraph
After the salutation, the paragraph starts with an attention getter and establishes the customer's need for the product. It makes the customer see how the item will be valuable to them.
Second paragraph
The following paragraph explains the specification of the goods and details how the customer will benefit from it.
Third paragraph
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