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The comparison criterion (Criteria) in this case will be the product measurements and weight, display, processor, battery, software, camera, storage, construction and colours. The Samsung Galaxy S4 is taller and wider than the Apple iPhone 5s. Both these phones are very thin, but the Samsung Galaxy S4 is around (Comparatively) thicker. Measurements and weight is one of the first criterions (criteria), Measurement of Apple iPhone 5S is 124x59x7.6mm and it weighs 112g, whereas Samsung Galaxy S4 measures 137x70x7.9mm and weighs 130g.
This made iPhone screens crispest (detailed) and sharpest ever seen for a Smartphone.
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The superiority of Apple over Samsung is waning (decreasing, declining, diminishing, dwindling, shrinking and contracting) with passage of time, with Samsung Galaxy Smartphone boasting similar features to Apple iPhone. On paper both these phones are great and both of them have their definite (explicit, specific, express, precise, exact, defined, well defined and clear-cut) appeals. Meaning the Apple iPhone 5s is lighter and smaller in size than the Samsung Galaxy S4, making it attractive (appealing, pleasing, tempting, fascinating and irresistible) option for the smaller handed customers. When Apple first came out with their retina display technology, they were one of the biggest (significant, major, key, vital, critical and crucial) selling factors for its sales.
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The Samsung Galaxy S4 is taller and wider than the Apple iPhone 5s (The Samsung Galaxy S4 is 10% taller and 19% wider than the Apple iPhone 5s. This results in shifting the Samsung Galaxy S4 in user’s hand for moving from the home button to the power button. While using Apple iPhone 5s the user can press the home and power button without shifting it in the user’s hand).
