For Practice
The passage contains both mechanical and grammatical errors. The first sentence should be fragmented to two sentences that read like this: “There are two arguments I am introducing. The first one is that more classes at CSU should be offered online.” The passage also lacks a comma in the last sentence. This sentence would be better if it reads like this: “Sometimes, if you have to take a class at the campus, being able to access it online would be helpful and convenient.” There is also a problem of sprawling sentence evident in the following sentence: “A larger selection of online classes will help a lot of students with the classes they have to take for their degree, and it will help them graduate on time.” This sentence may be rewritten as follows: “The second one is that there should be a larger selection of classes offered online. This will help students to take the necessary classes for their degree hence graduating on time.”
There are two arguments I am introducing. The first one is that more classes at CSU should be offered online. Such classes are helpful to students who cannot make it to campus due to their busy schedules. The second one is that there should be a larger selection of classes offered online. This will help students to take the necessary classes for their degree hence graduating on time. Sometimes, if you have to take a class at the campus, being able to access it online would be helpful and convenient.
Assignment
Parking on campus is absolutely ridiculous and there is nothing positive to say about it. There are two reasons why parking on campus at Cleveland State University is a disaster. First, the parking fee is way too high for students. Students are charged two hundred dollars for hand tags that sellout quick due to the high due to the high demand for parking slots. Second, the university over-sells the hand tags leading to lack of space for some students with hand tags. Such mismanagement can lead to disastrous results for students. I missed my psychology test last week because I could not find a parking space.
